Monday, November 17, 2008

Message to Obama

Dear President Obama:

I congratulate you have been elected as the president of the United States. There are five things I would like you to change. First, global warming is getting wrose and wrose and I think it's important for us to concern about this issue. Second, I think we must stop the war preventing more people from being hurt. Racial discrimination is still exist now, I think every person is equal as others and shouldn't be look down upon someone else. World's economy is decreasing in recent years, we should take action to stop more people from losing their jobs. Saving the people who suffer from poor, huger, diseases and unfair treatment. I think change is good as long as it doesn't violate others' right.

1 comment:

Aiden said...

Hi kevin,

Great post.

You could change your first line to, '...for having been elected as the first ...;
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